サンプル・レスポンス【タイプ２】

以下は、タイプ２の例題（ETS Writing for an Academic Discussion practice questionsから転載したQuestion 1）及び、それに対するサンプル・レスポンスです。

例題

Your professor is teaching a class on sociology. Write a post responding to the professor’s question.

In your response, you should do the following:

• Express and support your opinion.
• Make a contribution to the discussion in your own words.

An effective response will contain at least 100 words.

Doctor Achebe: Let’s think about population trends in urban and rural areas (villages). Living in urban areas can be expensive; nonetheless, when they have a choice of where to live, people in some countries do not wish to live in rural areas even if the cost of living there is lower. If governments of some countries want to attract more people to live in rural areas or villages, what is the best strategy or approach that governments can use? Why?

Claire: I would live in a rural are if the government gave more financial help to farmers. Although it may cost very little to live in a rural area, it costs a lot to begin a career in agriculture. If I had financial help, I would start my own farm and be happy to live in a rural area.

Kelly: In my country, urban centers are great places to live because you can access shops, restaurants, and museums. If the government of my country wanted to attract me to live in a rural area, the area would first have to attract more business focused on entertainment and culture than most rural areas have now.

サンプル・レスポンス

Governments aiming to attract residents to rural areas should implement a multifaceted strategy addressing social infrastructure, economic opportunities, and lifestyle amenities. Firstly, improving rural infrastructure is crucial. For example, safe roads, reliable public transportation, and advanced healthcare services are essential for a comfortable living environment. Additionally, investing in educational institutions and digital connectivity is vital to enhance the overall quality of life.

Equally important is creating economic incentives, as Claire rightly points out. Governments could provide tax breaks for businesses establishing themselves in rural areas, fostering job opportunities. Supporting local agriculture and promoting sustainable practices could lead to the development of niche industries. Furthermore, offering affordable housing initiatives can make rural living financially appealing.

In addition, as Kelly’s post suggests, cultural and recreational amenities should not be overlooked. Developing community spaces, cultural events, and recreational facilities can contribute to a vibrant rural lifestyle. Balancing the tranquility of rural living with modern conveniences is key to attracting individuals seeking a more relaxed environment without sacrificing comforts. Overall, a comprehensive approach that considers infrastructure, economic opportunities, and lifestyle enhancements will be most effective in encouraging urban residents to make the move to rural areas.